cooldude518's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dental Dam]

And another crap flash passes

Sererously i dont know what to say about this other then it was a peice of crap. you have a face with a really annoying noice in the background and what looks like a 10 frame loop of squggly lines in the back.

Please make an actual flash, dont tarnish your name making spam flash that only gets passed because your part of the clocks. Have some decency

LokiClock responds:

no u

[History of Stickmen 2]

its alright

I liked this flash. However, iot still needs work, I'm not trying to discourage you when i say this but your drawing still needs work. if may make some suggestions that will help it would be this:

- for buttons, make a box behind the object. because its a lot easier to click on, it looks better it and it takes almost no time to make.

-try using straight lines, the sloppy hand drawn arrows dont impress people much

-i know your probly in your early stages of animation but try making the setting a bit better, a little close up drawing really does make a difference

okay, so now that im dont that heres what i did enjoy. then plot was okay, i laighed a couple times when i read about the parts of the stickman. so to wrap this up i think you did good. I hope to see more

Darkwind28 responds:

Hi there cooldude.

1. Kai.
2. What arrows..?
3. Well.. I'm not, and the plain, simple setting helps people to focus on the real content.

[Waterlollies]

Another great Brankenwood tale

Like many others its been a while since I've last reviewed a movie but I think it's about time. Waterlollies and all of the Brakenwood seiries are magnificent, if I dont say so myself, better most animated T.V shows. With that said, lets move on.
Your skill in making an enviroment still amaze me and the overall tone is great for the story. You critisize yourself for story telling but this one has a good message. What goes around come around and that really came through to develope Bitey as character. Great story, great animation, I hope theres more soon

P.S. You really should think about submitting this to a movie contest to get some good awards. In my opinion, you could string together the stories and make a short film. but you do what you do best.

-Cooldude518

[HALOMEN2]

Great movie

always a fun thing when its tankmen, I like the halflife part in this i mean the portal was drawn quite well and gordon to. i have no bad critizizem here.
Nice Job

Cooldude518

[Code:R.E.D. Episode 1]

Love IT!

Great Animation, Great Story, Canadian (Go Canada), and an amazing soundtrack.
I love the whole thing, short, but great. I like the fact its a canadian because no one would expect it. The good country with secrets only its computers out the only crime were really good at.
Hope for the sequel soon.

[PZ's Guitar Hero]

One word: Bad

This isnt ng material also it wasnt that great it was white with some guy playing guitar hero but I only know this because its the title.
-the fingering was waaaay off ex. the same note was played in 3 different spots
-add some background and make it intresting
-have an intro or at least put the title in the movie
Last peice of advice/critizism
-get arms

[Behold The FUTURE]

Nice Job

An apocolypse prediction? funny and catchy song nice job

[DERAILED]

a wee bit dramatic but great

This movie was well done and it looks like u spent u time on it but the death after the accident was a wee dramatic.
MY OBSERVATIONS
Pros:
- That first part must have taken you like 5 hours for all the rocks and the detail on the rail wow im impressed by that
- I love the face of the derailer he made me rotfl
- the guys guts great details in that little bit aswell as the bodies outside that was well done and alot of time
music was very fitting to what ever situation but the heavy metal shocked me the first time i watched it
Cons:
- When the train flips its way un realistic because its not 1 big object its like 4 or 5
- also when it flips the smoke stays in the same spot with the train(It was just a large symbol i could tell)
- editing mistake the fliped train's head coach the top is underneath the railway
- Im probly not the first to point out you re used the first clip of the people on the zoomed out cam
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Other than what I have said wow you spent mabey a month to three months working on that and cudos to you. like the other reviewers great job, could use some improvments but other than that great, funny film and a bit ironic to say the last. congrats on #1 for now...
Thumps up by
Cooldude518

JoeandTom responds:

Thanks for the long review, twas was a good read!

I was well aware of all the 'mistakes' however. I'll be honest, this whole thing only took me 3 days... I was not expecting anything of it. I'm surprised so many enjoyed it! Even if this flash is listed in the top 100 for a day... lol, I didn't see it coming.