cooldude518's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dental Dam]

And another crap flash passes

Sererously i dont know what to say about this other then it was a peice of crap. you have a face with a really annoying noice in the background and what looks like a 10 frame loop of squggly lines in the back.

Please make an actual flash, dont tarnish your name making spam flash that only gets passed because your part of the clocks. Have some decency

LokiClock responds:

no u

[History of Stickmen 2]

its alright

I liked this flash. However, iot still needs work, I'm not trying to discourage you when i say this but your drawing still needs work. if may make some suggestions that will help it would be this:

- for buttons, make a box behind the object. because its a lot easier to click on, it looks better it and it takes almost no time to make.

-try using straight lines, the sloppy hand drawn arrows dont impress people much

-i know your probly in your early stages of animation but try making the setting a bit better, a little close up drawing really does make a difference

okay, so now that im dont that heres what i did enjoy. then plot was okay, i laighed a couple times when i read about the parts of the stickman. so to wrap this up i think you did good. I hope to see more

Darkwind28 responds:

Hi there cooldude.

1. Kai.
2. What arrows..?
3. Well.. I'm not, and the plain, simple setting helps people to focus on the real content.

[DERAILED]

a wee bit dramatic but great

This movie was well done and it looks like u spent u time on it but the death after the accident was a wee dramatic.
MY OBSERVATIONS
Pros:
- That first part must have taken you like 5 hours for all the rocks and the detail on the rail wow im impressed by that
- I love the face of the derailer he made me rotfl
- the guys guts great details in that little bit aswell as the bodies outside that was well done and alot of time
music was very fitting to what ever situation but the heavy metal shocked me the first time i watched it
Cons:
- When the train flips its way un realistic because its not 1 big object its like 4 or 5
- also when it flips the smoke stays in the same spot with the train(It was just a large symbol i could tell)
- editing mistake the fliped train's head coach the top is underneath the railway
- Im probly not the first to point out you re used the first clip of the people on the zoomed out cam
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Other than what I have said wow you spent mabey a month to three months working on that and cudos to you. like the other reviewers great job, could use some improvments but other than that great, funny film and a bit ironic to say the last. congrats on #1 for now...
Thumps up by
Cooldude518

JoeandTom responds:

Thanks for the long review, twas was a good read!

I was well aware of all the 'mistakes' however. I'll be honest, this whole thing only took me 3 days... I was not expecting anything of it. I'm surprised so many enjoyed it! Even if this flash is listed in the top 100 for a day... lol, I didn't see it coming.

[Timesplitters FP server]

not bad flash

good job but may i say you did swell on the spelling like"i cant gut a shot" great flash but there nothing more that makes me dislike a movie than horrible spelling
good job great spoof but fix the spelling cuz it look horrible when the word get it spelled wrong

flashTEK responds:

lol youve got it all wrong you see online people save time by writing shortly like this omfg ders a roket launcher! see playing an fps online game and typing fully while shooting isnt really gonna keep you alive is it? you see your just misunderstood i was trying to catch the reality of the online game. i reccomend watching son bitch counter strike or other cs parodys you will get the gravity of the situation by watching that.

[Vancouver Flash]

i knew nothing of vancouver

you know i knew nothing of vancouver until i watched this. The OLYMPICS coming in four years and living in canada my whole life this was a first for me so thank you for honoring vancouver

TheMint400 responds:

werd to the olympics! i'm def volunteering at that.

[Some Fight]

little more time and effort

if you make it a little longer and better backround this thing will be #1
make more map and i don't think this disapear like that but over all good job

blood-leach responds:

i said it was small but o well thx anyway